Suggestions from Sunday's presentation practice.
Time: 80 minutes
General stuff
Brian (Introduction) (9 minutes)
Emily (Environment and Climate Change) (12 minutes)
Alex V (MPAs) (14 minutes)
Jack (Management and Technology) (7 minutes)
David (Aquaculture) (6 minutes)
Clair (Socio-economic) (8 minutes)
Alex J (International) (18 minutes)
Taylor (Conclusion) (6 minutes)
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Amanda N Mok
intro
• over exploitation
• bottom trawling
• trophic level
• problem
• no "scaling"
• damage seen from space
• "thus" introduce self
• explain how things gropu together
• work with fishermen to solve problem
environment
• explain problem
• inflection
• point v non-spoint source
• pH = acidic water
• define terms
• speed/tempo
• cruise ships
• disjointed
• importance to marine fishery
• importance of dams
technology & management
• graphics on ticklers are pixilated
• graphic on ticklers
• comfortable =D
• depressed tone
• organization
• technical info
• long sentences w/ multiple clauses
• first graphic
• time and money on research
• statistics (place, example, species)
• trawl 10-15 minutes, 2-6 hours
• square v diagonal mesh
• breathing
• 20 hz
• introduce technology (already in use)
• quotas
• management first
• problem with current technology
• dyslexia
• talk with hands
• stand in middle
• regulatory methods/improvements
• "they" = fishermen
• ITGs, not business scheme
mpa
• turn entire body
• too close to panel
• speak well =D
• dramatic = traumatic
• amount = "number" of years
• "firstly"
• "10% is concrete goal" too much
• software -> no names / list as example
• hand movements
• "next slide"
• percentage/proportion, not absolute area
• don't say "10% is arbitrary"
• colors of last graphic
• next to last graphic
• define terms
• pointer
• "order of magnitude difference"
• Philippines spillover graphs -> lose equations
• why 10%, why 15 years -> format
• no need to bring up job loss
aquaculture
• longer intro
• ("some" -> serious) enrvironment issues
• explain - tidal flushing, algal blooms, site selection, carrying capacity, intensive v extensive (where)
• introduce problem
• graphic on capture
• examples of successful sites
• "separate" from ecosystem
• Norwegian salmon farms
• "hopefully"
• delay before intro to next section
• slower tempo in beginning
• more time on benefits instead of problem
• hand moving w/o purpose
• replace first graphic -> doesn't agree with solution
• human issue
• more graphics
• replace last graphic
• include slides on harmful effects
• motion of head to mike
• practice pronunciation
socio/economic
• no green urchin slide
• propose quota/tax -> implementation (time), technology, explain!
• info to "panel" of economists -> how to calculate tax
• 100% sustainable methods
• take out last statistic (30%)
• justify section (aka lose jobs anyways if don't fish sustainably)
• don't talk about fishermen as if not present
• location of Maldives (+ pronunciation)
• supplements for fish transition
• days at sea
• pacing
• back up from panel
• look at everybody
• speech and organization =D
• tongue noises
• rejobbing on slide
• use of "also"
• graphics
• acronym use
• method of expanding agriculture
• pic of statue -> reference
international
• focus on international treaty -> don't reiterate formerly said info
• eco-label section doesn't fit
• use of word "state"
• list of member states
• "sort of" / "kind of"
• slow down tempo
• close to panel
• flags of convenience -> register []?
• non-wikipedia source
• define acronyms/terms
• don't bring attention to mistakes
• off-topic?
• order of law of the sea
• explain further measures for illegal fishing
• explain fish stocks law and magnuson-stevens act
• extent of compromise
• public support -> Kyoto?
conclusion
• bad-ass hand-in-pocket =D
• "thanks" after conclusion
• more formal
• focus on management & technology
• riparian buffers, not woodlands?
• statistics
• don't apologize
• "interactive"
• acknowledge EVERYBODY
• move graphics
• marine "RESERVES" not "protected areas"
• "thank you" slide
• break between sections
all
• pause
• body language
• transitions
• notes
• problems
• not same text on both slides
• end thoughts
• transition w/ context
flowchart
• reduce fishing
• supplement fishing
• preserve ecosystem
• implementation