Suggestions from Sunday's presentation practice.

Time: 80 minutes

General stuff

Brian (Introduction) (9 minutes)

Emily (Environment and Climate Change) (12 minutes)

Alex V (MPAs) (14 minutes)

Jack (Management and Technology) (7 minutes)

David (Aquaculture) (6 minutes)

Clair (Socio-economic) (8 minutes)

Alex J (International) (18 minutes)

Taylor (Conclusion) (6 minutes)

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  1. intro
    • over exploitation
    • bottom trawling
    • trophic level
    • problem
    • no "scaling"
    • damage seen from space
    • "thus" introduce self
    • explain how things gropu together
    • work with fishermen to solve problem
    environment
    • explain problem
    • inflection
    • point v non-spoint source
    • pH = acidic water
    • define terms
    • speed/tempo
    • cruise ships
    • disjointed
    • importance to marine fishery
    • importance of dams
    technology & management
    • graphics on ticklers are pixilated
    • graphic on ticklers
    • comfortable =D
    • depressed tone
    • organization
    • technical info
    • long sentences w/ multiple clauses
    • first graphic
    • time and money on research
    • statistics (place, example, species)
    • trawl 10-15 minutes, 2-6 hours
    • square v diagonal mesh
    • breathing
    • 20 hz
    • introduce technology (already in use)
    • quotas
    • management first
    • problem with current technology
    • dyslexia
    • talk with hands
    • stand in middle
    • regulatory methods/improvements
    • "they" = fishermen
    • ITGs, not business scheme
    mpa
    • turn entire body
    • too close to panel
    • speak well =D
    • dramatic = traumatic
    • amount = "number" of years
    • "firstly"
    • "10% is concrete goal" too much
    • software -> no names / list as example
    • hand movements
    • "next slide"
    • percentage/proportion, not absolute area
    • don't say "10% is arbitrary"
    • colors of last graphic
    • next to last graphic
    • define terms
    • pointer
    • "order of magnitude difference"
    • Philippines spillover graphs -> lose equations
    • why 10%, why 15 years -> format
    • no need to bring up job loss
    aquaculture
    • longer intro
    • ("some" -> serious) enrvironment issues
    • explain - tidal flushing, algal blooms, site selection, carrying capacity, intensive v extensive (where)
    • introduce problem
    • graphic on capture
    • examples of successful sites
    • "separate" from ecosystem
    • Norwegian salmon farms
    • "hopefully"
    • delay before intro to next section
    • slower tempo in beginning
    • more time on benefits instead of problem
    • hand moving w/o purpose
    • replace first graphic -> doesn't agree with solution
    • human issue
    • more graphics
    • replace last graphic
    • include slides on harmful effects
    • motion of head to mike
    • practice pronunciation
    socio/economic
    • no green urchin slide
    • propose quota/tax -> implementation (time), technology, explain!
    • info to "panel" of economists -> how to calculate tax
    • 100% sustainable methods
    • take out last statistic (30%)
    • justify section (aka lose jobs anyways if don't fish sustainably)
    • don't talk about fishermen as if not present
    • location of Maldives (+ pronunciation)
    • supplements for fish transition
    • days at sea
    • pacing
    • back up from panel
    • look at everybody
    • speech and organization =D
    • tongue noises
    • rejobbing on slide
    • use of "also"
    • graphics
    • acronym use
    • method of expanding agriculture
    • pic of statue -> reference
    international
    • focus on international treaty -> don't reiterate formerly said info
    • eco-label section doesn't fit
    • use of word "state"
    • list of member states
    • "sort of" / "kind of"
    • slow down tempo
    • close to panel
    • flags of convenience -> register []?
    • non-wikipedia source
    • define acronyms/terms
    • don't bring attention to mistakes
    • off-topic?
    • order of law of the sea
    • explain further measures for illegal fishing
    • explain fish stocks law and magnuson-stevens act
    • extent of compromise
    • public support -> Kyoto?
    conclusion
    • bad-ass hand-in-pocket =D
    • "thanks" after conclusion
    • more formal
    • focus on management & technology
    • riparian buffers, not woodlands?
    • statistics
    • don't apologize
    • "interactive"
    • acknowledge EVERYBODY
    • move graphics
    • marine "RESERVES" not "protected areas"
    • "thank you" slide
    • break between sections
    all
    • pause
    • body language
    • transitions
    • notes
    • problems
    • not same text on both slides
    • end thoughts
    • transition w/ context
    flowchart
    • reduce fishing
    • supplement fishing
    • preserve ecosystem
    • implementation