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TA Feedback.

As we discussed, I think you guys are on to something really cool. There are some issues with your GR1 that need work before moving forward, however.

The first thing is that instead of stating a problem, you share your solution, though you provide a bit of motivation for it. Think of it first as a problem to be solved.

You also don't seem to really get a good feel for what the tasks your users use to solve your problems, and instead you describe actions that your app will let users take. Don't forget that the next step is to make three separate designs - you shouldn't already have picked one. Think of task analysis as the analysis of tasks that need to be done to solve the problems.

I'd appreciate it if you made these changes, since we'll be working off this document for the whole rest of the project.